We completed a rough cut of our film opening, exported and presented to our group. Feedback was good, our peers thought visually our peice was great with particular sucessful editing techniques such as the mirror shots. However the narrative was not clear so we need to work on our order and cuts to help this, we must also re check all stills and footage are taken landscape. To make sure our narrative is clear set we aim to have flashes of the possessed girls face, how she was before the doll obsession, before each change of scene. This will allow the audience to keep relating back to her more stable state of mind.
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