Well done - you both contribute relevant and focused research on the blog and I'm excited by your proposed idea.
Kitty - your product and technical analysis is outstanding - particularly the use of technical terminology. You have also gone beyond the minimum list of posts, documenting ideas development and commenting on Lilli's research. High L4
Lilli - you started very well, researching genres and contributing valuable research to the blog - however there is a significant drop off. Your analysis of 2 openings is very promising, particularly '28 Days Later', however you are missing the technical analysis. You need to comment on Kitty's research, document the ideas development and contribute your share of "group" posts. Level 3
I know that you are both capable of producing a top grade piece and from what I have seen so far from your practical tasks show real talent in visual work, however Lilli you must focus on attendance and contributions to research to ensure a truly collaborative piece of work.
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